I like the black and white contrast you used. The picture itself reminds me of some Final Fantasy or Dynasty Warriors art, and has a very evocative high fantasy feeling.
My only complaint would be a canonically accurate portrayal. In the book, he's described as incredibly tall, so I'd say over 6', and if the spear is to scale, then that thing would be over 10' long, which is ridiculous.
Also, Kaladin has three brands on his forehead, which are circular I believe.
Syl wears a dress.
Of course you have artistic license.
Overall, I like your interpretation of the Highstorm and Kaladin's Stormlight.
10 foot long isn't actually that long; I think this picture is the closest rendition of Kaladin I have seen yet!
It could also be argued Syl is wearing a dress here; a full bodied spren like dress that flows with her as she moves. You can see the lines of a dress around her bust and around and below her waist too.
I agree with the slave marks, however it does look alot more badass this way!
Very much an artist impression with the armour/clothing, however I love it so much! This has been my monitor background for weeks now!!
Awesome job man; do some more!! Shardplate? Adolin???
This is so great, its like you ripped it right out of the book for all he was described to be. thank you for enhancing my reading experience by giving me such an image to use while i form the pictures in my mind. please make more drawings of other characters, you are very good.